Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Certain individuals believe that movies can be watched through
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hand-held
hand held
devices than going to a theatre while some Correct your spelling
handheld
argues
that to get the exact feeling, we need to go to a film hall. In my opinion, it needs to be viewed by going to a theatre. Change the verb form
argue
This
essay will firstly
discuss how time can be saved by working through mobiles and secondly
, it will explain the enthusiasm which can be gained when it is experienced at a cinema.
To begin
with, currently
people are Add a comma
,currently
busy
than Correct quantifier usage
more busy
never
before and watching a movie via a Correct your spelling
ever
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hand-held
hand held
device is a Correct your spelling
handheld
time saving
activity with pleasure. Add a hyphen
time-saving
Although
,
people are engaged in many work every minute, they can watch a film using a phone while they are engaging Remove the comma
apply
any
task. Change preposition
in any
For example
, I used to watch teledramas which i
missed Change the capitalization
I
previous
day when I was travelling after work.
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the previous
a previous
On the other hand
, many individuals expect to enjoy movies at film halls since it is a change for
their Change preposition
in
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lifestyle
life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Eventhough
, the time is limited, Correct your spelling
Even though
public
visits Correct article usage
the public
cinema
to get that atmosphere with sounds and effects which gives liveliness Correct article usage
the cinema
for
scenes. Change preposition
to
In addition
to that, it is a great opportunity to catch up with friends to mitigate stress which builds up in daily activities. For instance
, our office colleagues are gathering every month for a theatre to refresh our minds.
In conclusion, it is true that people are having conjested
life with their employment but it should not be a barrier to enjoy ourselves by engaging in activities Correct your spelling
congested
such
as watching movies which fade away our daily struggles.Submitted by TSP on
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