Some scientist thinks that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few analysts assume that there are high cognitive creatures on the earth that should be contacted while
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of the
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feel is a dreadful idea and will be on the
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of view,and
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state my opinion. On one hand,there are
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points to support the need for
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animals should be
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, some domestic animals are useful to humans,
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as security purpose for people due to their level of sensitivity,help to secure and alert the owner that
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them.
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,in times of robbery attack,dogs have the ability to perceive humans from a distance.
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,in terms of fertilization,cow faeces serve as manure for farm produces,
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farmers to enable their crops to germinate quickly for man consumption,
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increase.
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scientist think it is dangerous to call out for some creatures from another planet.One major reason is that wild brute creation can endanger human
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an individual,it results in the death of the person. All of these can cause a reduction in the country's population. Thank for my In conclusion, despite the usefulness of some high-level creatures that are important to humans for security and farm productivity,I opine that the disadvantage of messaging the intelligent
life
form from other globes is the high side risk to human
life
. I recommend that if the scientist should contact them,
then
the wild ones should be kept in the zoo for tourists purpose.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • technological advancement
  • human progress
  • exchange of knowledge
  • pressing problems
  • environmental issues
  • broadening of humanity’s horizon
  • external existence
  • collaborative
  • security threat
  • dominate
  • unpredictability
  • malevolent intentions
  • colonization
  • exploitation
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