You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - describe what you enjoyed about the course - say how much cooking you've done since the course - suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to provide

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feedback on the "Kitchen Wonders" cookery

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I have taken recently. As my cooking had become more and more complimented ever since

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I would like to take

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opportunity to express my appreciation for the evolution I have attained from the

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. Albeit a short and basic

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, it contained useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which were entirely new to me. Having always cooked by instinct these tips brought to light simple mistakes I had been making, which now I avoid.

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, I particularly enjoyed the "Kitchen Hacks" module, and its techniques have brought my cooking skills to a new level. I have been using these lessons on weekends

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when I normally cook for my family, and the difference is clear. The effect the

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had on my dishes has been remarked on some occasions,

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. Still, I am confident they shall not be disappointed. I intend on honing the skill

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, especially since the

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did not address dessert-making. Should

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be offered,

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would be delighted to

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and keep collecting awestruck expressions from my relatives. I really appreciate the results your

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has provided me, and I look forward to

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more. Sincerely, Paulo