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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#translation #software #language
With the advantage of technology, a myriad of activities
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 been facilitated.
For example
, it is possible to travel overseas without knowing the local
language
 as many online
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software
softwares
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 can contour
this
 limitation and assist in communication.
However
, a recent trend considers that not relying
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 these tools and proper learning
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language
 has its benefits. The paragraphs below will outline a complete agreement
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this
 issue.
To begin
 with, the main reason to justify why learning another
language
 would be advantageous is to avoid misinterpretation.
Although
 languages have,
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, their grammar and structures to be followed, native speakers are not attached to these rules. As a matter of fact, giving new meanings to already existent words or creating new ones, like
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, is a consequence of communicating, which could be a problem with the online tools, as it would require constant updates in order to translate properly according to the context and not to the literal meaning.
Furthermore
, another cogent motive to support my opinion is because it can enhance comprehension and interpretation of several other languages. Historically, some cultures are descendants
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 the same people,
thus
 the way they speak and write, in some features, have similarities.
For instance
, by learning Portuguese, it is easier to follow dialogues in Spanish and French without
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instruction.
On the other hand
, by learning English, it is possible to understand some pieces of a conversation in Dutch as well. To conclude, I strongly agree that learning a
language
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 to communicate, as it allows an adequate use of the
language
 and exchange of information among parts, as well as can be used
further
 to learn a
third
 one, or at least have some comprehension of it.
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