Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people are of the opinion that a colossal amount of

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and time should be diverted to human society rather than allot to combat the

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of some

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. While I agree with the idea that resources that we make should be used for human development, I believe that

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of wild

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plays an important role. There are many compelling reasons why the

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will be better spent on the human population, especially healthcare and

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be thoroughly reconsidered.

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, having a high-level

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will help the country have more talents, thereby supporting the development of the state in a variety of aspects

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as economy, tourism, production and foreign affairs. Based on the above,

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should be the

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choice to be invested in. But

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, there is a thing that plays an equally important pivotal for society

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healthcare. When the government diverted more

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to

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the national upgrading national medical background, it will help the citizens to have better social welfare. As individuals WELLBEING IS TAKEN CARE OF, it will help them have a positive life from there will help them be more active and have more energy at work.

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will bring many developments to the workforce and the more thriving the economy will become.

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, despite the practical concerns expressed above, there is no doubt that

conservation

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the conservation

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of wild

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needs more attention and investment. These days, there is a pressing issue that the amount of wild

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on the verge of

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is on the rise. To be aware that humans should realize the unshakeable importance of wild

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to natural balance, and why the

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of wild

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will pose a dire threat to the survival of mankind. There have been many alarming moves to everyone

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as articles, petitions and protests.

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, oysters or many other sea creatures help purify and keep the ocean healthier, so if they disappear, as the earth kidneys they will pose a threat to the ocean environment, which will lead to the

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of many other marine

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.

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will make a gross misspent

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the human food chain, and

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the operation of the earth can

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lead to the

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of humans. In conclusion, the government should allocate

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evenly and equally to both the human population and to combat the

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of some

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, because these issues are of utmost importance to humanity and the earth.