Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people are of the opinion that a colossal amount of

money

and time should be diverted to human society rather than allot to combat the

extinction

of some

animals

. While I agree with the idea that resources that we make should be used for human development, I believe that

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of wild

animals

also

plays an important role. There are many compelling reasons why the

money

will be better spent on the human population, especially healthcare and

education

,

should

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be thoroughly reconsidered.

Firstly

, having a high-level

education

will help the country have more talents, thereby supporting the development of the state in a variety of aspects

such

as economy, tourism, production and foreign affairs. Based on the above,

education

should be the

first

choice to be invested in. But

besides

education

, there is a thing that plays an equally important pivotal for society

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healthcare. When the government diverted more

money

to

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the national upgrading national medical background, it will help the citizens to have better social welfare. As individuals WELLBEING IS TAKEN CARE OF, it will help them have a positive life from there will help them be more active and have more energy at work.

This

will bring many developments to the workforce and the more thriving the economy will become.

On the other hand

, despite the practical concerns expressed above, there is no doubt that

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the conservation

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of wild

animals

needs more attention and investment. These days, there is a pressing issue that the amount of wild

animals

on the verge of

extinction

is on the rise. To be aware that humans should realize the unshakeable importance of wild

animals

to natural balance, and why the

extinction

of wild

animals

will pose a dire threat to the survival of mankind. There have been many alarming moves to everyone

such

as articles, petitions and protests.

For example

, oysters or many other sea creatures help purify and keep the ocean healthier, so if they disappear, as the earth kidneys they will pose a threat to the ocean environment, which will lead to the

extinction

of many other marine

animals

.

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will make a gross misspent

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the human food chain, and

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the operation of the earth can

then

lead to the

extinction

of humans. In conclusion, the government should allocate

money

evenly and equally to both the human population and to combat the

extinction

of some

animals

, because these issues are of utmost importance to humanity and the earth.