Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or agree with this opinion.

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Tourism in some countries is their main source of income.

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region has contributed a large number of resources, human effort, and time in other to make sure the place is conducive enough for folks who are coming to explore and learn about their culture and heritage.

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community leader ensures they have good infrastructures like roads, hospitals, hotels, and restaurants. The following points will explain why the local occupant should spend less.

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, During the process of making the environment a comfortable place, the residents are deprived of their daily activities. In Nigeria, there is an area called Badagry.

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community is close to the sea. During the slavery period, the sea is where the white people transport the slaves. The community is one of the places

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being visited in the country. There is a resort called whispering palm, during the construction of

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resort, the local people were deprived of a lane of the road they use, they were moved to a smaller building for them to access care because the government was building a modernized health facility and constructing a good road. Even though they had to endure all

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, the resident made themselves available to assist during the building of

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resort.

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, international guest doesn't visit a location every time of the year. There are seasons when there is an increased number of immigrants.

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is why the regional occupant should be allowed to sell their products and goods at the price they want for them to make a profit during that time.

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, there is an increased inflow of

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coming to Santorini During the summer than in the winter season. To conclude, International

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should give more than the dweller for cultural and heritage views.

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essay agrees with

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suggestion. I will advise the government to put

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into law for the sake of the occupants.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

317 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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