Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?”
Many
museums
have different admission
policies based on their operating budgets and funds. Some of them charge
for free and for some others you should pay for entrance. This
rule comes with advantages such
as an increasing people
's desire to visit
a different historical place and disadvantages that will be mentioned in this
assay.
To begin
with, there are two main benefits of free admission
. Firstly
, it may help people
’s desire to visit
museums
thus
, the number of visitors increased significantly. Museums
and other historical places
are symbols of the culture and traditions of every country. If the museum entries are free not only the student but also
people
all around the world will become inclined to visit
there. With this
policy, governments can diminish the differences gap among other countries and try to showcase the cultural tradition and their background history to build a friendly relationship. Secondly
, people
from all social and economic statuses can enjoy visiting museums
regardless of their income and social bases.
On the contrary
, it is inevitable for some organizations to come to an equilibrium stage, as they are unable to bear their maintenance cost. Therefore
, charge
for admission
can help in their expenses such
as electricity, salaries of employees and also
these buildings need more care mostly. Additionally
, it also
gives people
the sense of responsibility to help maintain these places
. In terms of charge
, I truly believe that authorities should allocate enough budgets in this
sector by our taxes. Considering visitors’ duty, in my opinion, with practical education we can teach museums
is part of our cultural heritage and should be addressed. As result, the benefit of free charge
outweighs the drawbacks.
In conclusion, with the elimination of admission
to museums
folk’s enthusiasm to visit
these places
maybe grow significantly. I strongly opine that the charge
of historical places
including museums
should be put on the local municipals.Submitted by mahboubi.negin on
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