Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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indispensable for the nation. One part of society believes that making additional
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individuals
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opinion and state that it will only bring gradual changes without other
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steps. In the forthcoming
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I will discuss both the notions and my perspective.
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belief of people, in
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areas there are not many
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facilities available for pupils .
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, If exercising
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public they will use those facilities offently. Engagement of people in
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sports
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activity will
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improve their physical
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.
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, it is
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proven that folks living in the areas near
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, gymnastic centres
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are in sound health than the
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distance. Moving towards the contrary side, some
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may not be able to take advantage of these centres.
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, older people who cannot perform physical activities will still stay in
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conditions.
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personality, there will be
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of
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interest
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interest
in using those exercising areas.
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, these
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facilities
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facilities
will only be beneficial to
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population.
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, to consider the importance of health for
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country there is
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to take other measures as well. To conclude, I agree with the lateral
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and recommend that government should not only build fitness centres, for
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equality
they need to take extra steps for as they can provide free seminars to spread health awareness.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • physical activities
  • fitness
  • obesity rates
  • sports centers
  • mental well-being
  • motivation
  • education
  • public health campaigns
  • nutritional education
  • preventative healthcare
  • health screenings
  • long-term health outcomes
  • lifestyle changes
  • stress management
  • smoking cessation
  • alcohol consumption
  • comprehensive public health improvement
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