After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing express your appreciation and offer him/ her to visit your home with his/her family

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Dear Harish, Hope you are doing well by the grace of the almighty. My name is Navjot Kaur and

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Wednesday I had an accident with the bike. I am writing

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letter to thank you that you were very kind and taking me to the hospital which saved my life. I really appreciate your support

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you gave me

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aid treatment and

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took me to the hospital. I could not think about it that anyone could save the life I was in so much pain and lost all hopes to survive after a major accident.

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, You altruistically saved my life

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very grateful to you. I would love

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you accept my invitation to come to dinner

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weekend. I know I would never be able to repay you back for the most wonderful charitable deed My family and I will be more than happy for your visit. yours sincerely Navjot

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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156 words

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