Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

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I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in accompanying my son on the institution trip to the

USA

. I was already planning a foray to the

USA

with my child but due to my busy ,

schedule

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,schedule

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we could not travel.

However

, I will be available

month so it will be a great opportunity for me to join my son on

this

seminary outing. I have visited the

USA

multiple times and I am very familiar with the cities that your academy is planning to visit;

therefore

, I think I will be able to share a lot of useful information with the students going on the expedition.

However

, I have two questions related to the cruise.

Firstly

, what will be the mode of transportation between the cities in the

USA

Secondly

, are we supposed to book the hotels ourselves or will it be done by the academy administration? I really hope that you will allow me to join my son on the trip. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Adam

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Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

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Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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6.50

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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The Greeting

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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