In today's world, the pressure of modern life negatively impacting family life. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, people’s personal lives

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pressurized by the modern norms of living.

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I agree with

this

notion because competition and priority for fulfilling monetary needs have increased over the

last

few decades.

Firstly

, human beings do overtime at the workplace which leaves less time for their families.

This

causes work-life

disbalance

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imbalance

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. To illustrate,

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to enjoy

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modern comforts

such

as a luxurious house and car, one works hard beyond his regular physical and mental capacity to take the pressure that makes individuals stay isolated for so long from their dear ones.

Consequently

, more frustration

due to

work leads to a

negatively impacting

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negative impact

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on household relationships.

Secondly

, people give more importance to money these days

instead

of love and affection from loved ones.

Due to

this

materialistic thinking and artificial comforts, most of the population wants to stay alone or live in relationships without living with more family members.

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, a study

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conducted on the young generation at Harvard University and it illustrated the results of modern technological advances on youngsters in Japan as 85% of them do not like to have a family life and prefer to live alone in their expensive apartments and mostly socialize with online friends; thereby declining significance of family bondings.

To conclude

,

due to

the increasing modernization phenomenon in the world one’s family life gets distracted which would be caused by more importance to work, money, monetary comforts and privacy.

Therefore

, in the future, fewer and fewer people

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give preference to being married and having children.