1.You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter odescribe the public event oexplain why you think he/she would like the event owrite how you can help your friend with accommodation

Dear Gagan, Hope you are doing splendidly! I'm writing
this
letter to invite you to India for a cultural event which is in August 2024. Let me explain
you
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about the
occassion
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occasion
, it is a collaboration of all the festivals our country
have
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. People from all over the world will come to participate and will exhibit the
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. There will be stalls of local famous foods
such
as samosa, jalebi, and pav bhaji.
Moreover
, you can buy hand-made stuff like clothes, shoes and
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from the fair.
Apart from
this
, some famous musicians and
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will perform to make it more interesting. Now the question is why you will enjoy it? So buddy, as you're far away from
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and
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been nights since we
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together.
Firstly
, you will get a chance to meet all
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friends and family.
Secondly
, you will enjoy eatables.
Thirdly
, your favourite artist Karan Aujla will organise a show. You will be over the moon once you enjoy
everythink
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everything
and will thank me later.
Additionally
, please
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do not
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a place to stay. If you have no objection you can stay at my home
otherwise
I will book a hotel room. Hopefully, you will join me for
this
special day. See you soon. Your friend, Waris
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task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task well. However, ensure that your reasons why your friend would like the event are clearly organized and not repetitive for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
To further improve the logical structure, consider breaking down longer sentences or combining shorter related ones to enhance readability.
task achievement
A warm and friendly tone has been maintained throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Your email begins with a lovely greeting and ends with a nice closing, creating a very friendly and welcoming atmosphere for your friend.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public event
  • cultural festival
  • annual
  • spectacular
  • performance
  • exhibition
  • recurring event
  • one-time occasion
  • attraction
  • highlight
  • interest
  • hobby
  • unique experience
  • local culture
  • accommodation
  • stay
  • recommend
  • bookings
  • transportation
  • guided tour
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