The rise of convenice foods has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Today's era is a modern era,
therefore
, it is believed that increasing the fast
food
outlets is helping people to adopt a modern lifestyle. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of
this
trend and give my suggestions at the end of the passage . On the one hand, there are many benefits of
this
trend.
First
of all, it saves time for people.
Such
as, they can order on skip and doordash online, with the help of their phone.
As a result
, they can get their
food
in less than one hour without
their
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wasting time cooking.
This
time can be used for other purposes like studying, enjoying with family members and so on.
Secondly
, there are different types of
food
available in the market. So, they do not bore to eat regularly
this
food
.
For example
, they can make
food
according to their just telling the ingredients to employees.
Last
but not the least, it is
also
money-saving
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process. Because they don't need to buy raw
food
from the market which will save five per cent of money according to the survey.
On the other hand
, it
also
has drawbacks to
this
trend.
Firstly
, it is unhealthy
food
as compared to homemade
food
. Because mostly convenience
food
outlets use frozen
food
, which is unhealthy.
For instance
, a survey conducted by a
pretigious
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prestigious
newspaper showed that fifty per cent of fast
food
stores serve stored and can
food
, which is harmful
for
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health.
As a result
, people face
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health-related
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health related
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problems like
overweight
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being overweight
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. Apart from
this
, it is
waste
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a waste
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of money because we have to pay
the
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double the amount for
this
food
as compared to homemade
food
. To conclude,
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even though
eventhough
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even though
junk
food
has increased our lifestyle and helped
to
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us to
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deal with busy life standards.
Nonetheless
,
i
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think that it has more disadvantages rather than advantages.
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