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You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter give the details of the flight explain what the problem with the food was say what the airline should do about it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to dissatisfaction with your
food
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 served. I am Rohan
patel
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Patel
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 and my ticket number is FI985624 . My site number
gh6754
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is gh6754
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 and was
traveling
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travelling
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 on 24 December for my business meeting. The problem is that
,
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apply
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this
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 day
i
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I
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 have fast and
not
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no
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time
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 to eat breakfast because have emergency work . When
i
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I
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 was
traveling
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travelling
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in
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on
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 your plane , tell
airline
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the airline
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 to
served
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serve
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 vegetarian
food
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. After one hour left they
had
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served
food
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 and
i
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I
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 see
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food
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 is
non vegetarian
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non-vegetarian
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. I am very hungry
on
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at
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this
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time
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 and tell
airline
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the airline
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 that changes my
food
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 . I had so much
time
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wait
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to wait
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food
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for food
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.
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. I would suggest
you
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that you check
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food
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the food
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 when there pack in
back
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the back
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 .
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, you teach some role your plane staff so
next
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time
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 any passengers not face
this
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 problem. I hope you take prompt action
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this
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on this
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 matter.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 faithfully, Rohan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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