In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
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A gap
The gap
year
is often an option that are
taken by Change the verb form
is
students
. Taking a year
off from study comes with Correct your spelling
benefits
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the benifits
benifits
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benefits
on
having opportunities for individuals to develop new Change preposition
of
skills
, and to
discover their passions. Fix the infinitive
apply
On the other hand
, this
plan may disadvantage people if time
is used unwisely, or if one feels getting delayed from
others.
Discussing Change preposition
by
from
the main advantages, taking a Change preposition
apply
year
off is a great way to hone up
soft Change preposition
apply
skills
. During high school and university years
it is not always Add a comma
,years
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guaranteed
guranteed
to have a place in the busy day to work on volunteering. But with Correct your spelling
guaranteed
gap
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a gap
year
, people can seriously take part in actions that would develop lifelong social skills
. Furthermore
, by having more time
to yourself
, individuals can discover Correct pronoun usage
themselves
its
passion. Correct pronoun usage
their
This
can be especially helpful for students
that are planning to study in America, where courses in university can be changed after enrolling. This
way it benefits students
to focus their
studies that are Change preposition
on their
alligned
to their passion.
Correct your spelling
aligned
In contrast
, the year
of self-discovery can be easily wasted if it is not planned constructively. Putting aside telephone calls for work experience, and instead
binging on TV shows can easily consume up all the time
for self development
. Meanwhile, others may feel delayed from taking the Add a hyphen
self-development
year
off. Especially with the recent accessibility to social
media Add an article
the social
platform
, people can easily compare themselves with others and may end up feeling like they are wasting Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
time
with the year
. Correct your spelling
In fact
Infact
, Correct your spelling
In fact
such
phenomena has
caused many Change the verb form
have
students
to feel negatively
about their gap Replace the adverb
negative
year
.
In conclusion, taking a year
off from study can create a chance to build interpersonal skills
. However
, such
advantage should be outweighted
by potential consequences Correct your spelling
outweighed
such
as,
ineffective Remove the comma
apply
time
usage, or the negative impacts on mental health.Submitted by akichanskk on
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