In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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having opportunities for individuals to develop new
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discover their passions.
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the main advantages, taking a
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it is not always
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to have a place in the busy day to work on volunteering. But with
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, people can seriously take part in actions that would develop lifelong social
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, individuals can discover
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passion.
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that are planning to study in America, where courses in university can be changed after enrolling.
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studies that are
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of self-discovery can be easily wasted if it is not planned constructively. Putting aside telephone calls for work experience, and
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binging on TV shows can easily consume up all the
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. Meanwhile, others may feel delayed from taking the
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off. Especially with the recent accessibility to
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, people can easily compare themselves with others and may end up feeling like they are wasting
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caused many
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about their gap
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. In conclusion, taking a
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off from study can create a chance to build interpersonal
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outweighed
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ineffective
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usage, or the negative impacts on mental health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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