Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Environmental protection is crucial for the city, some people believe that the

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should take responsibility while others state that citizens should be responsible.

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latter opinion. On the one hand, there are two reasons why the

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should be responsible. The main reason is that the

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can set up policies to protect the

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.

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, they can set up

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bag charging scheme, so under economic pressure, people will tend to throw less rubbish and reduce landfill waste. Another reason is that the

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can educate citizens. They can hold some talks at schools or make some advertisements about how to protect the

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through

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so it can allow people to understand how to be more environmentally friendly.

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, the

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can have many ways to protect the

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, so they should be responsible.

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, there are two reasons why

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should be responsible.

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, their behaviours affect the

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the most. If everyone changes their habits a bit,

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as throwing less trash or taking more public

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, those actions can provide huge effects on

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environment

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.

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, its

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to choose

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follow the

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’s advice.

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, when the

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provide suggestions and advice on how to protect the

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,

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if the

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do not follow them,

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still ineffective in protecting

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environment

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the environment

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.

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,

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individuals

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seem neglectable, if everyone can do it together, it will have a huge effect. To conclude,

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may have stronger power to control citizens, whether

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cooperate or not is more important, so they have more responsibility.