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Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think the advantages of this approach outweigh the disadvantages?

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In our modern society, it is quite easy to find
people
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 having
business
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 online meetings and training. Especially after 2020, the number of online
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 meetings has increased rapidly because of
covid
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the covid
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 situation all over the world. Doing
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 meetings and training online has
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advantages
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 and
disadvantages
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. In my point of view, I believe that the
advantages
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 of
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 outweigh the
disadvantages
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.
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, one of the
advantages
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 of doing
business
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 online is that reducing
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time
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the time
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for
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of
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 going
offices
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to offices
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 directly.
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business
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a business
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person
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people
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 have to spend 80 minutes on average
toward
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 their offices,
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 it gives
a
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stress
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on
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people
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, especially
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those who
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taking
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 a crowded train in Tokyo.
According to a
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 survey conducted by the Japanese government showed that the stress level of
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 who do not take train has decreased.
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,
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 makes clear that doing
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 online
have
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advantage
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an advantage
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 in terms of reducing
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 for going
workplaces
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.
On the other hand
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, one of the
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 of doing
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 online is that it is difficult to make good
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 between workers.
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,
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people
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 can talk in
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way
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 during breaking
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 in their office, which
lead
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in
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to
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 making good
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 between them.
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, it
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 to have
a
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enough
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 to communicate well
on
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 the environment online,
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 the majority of the freshmen who do not have enough communication
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 face to face answered that they do not feel
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 good
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 with coworkers.
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, it becomes apparent that doing
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 online have
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disadvantage in terms of making good
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 with better communication. To sum up, there are both
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advantages
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 and
disadvantages
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for
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to
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 doing
business
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 online. I agreed with the statement that the
advantages
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 of
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way
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 outweigh the
disadvantages
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 because reducing commute
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 and stress
level
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levels
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 have
big
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a big
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 impact on
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´s mental health. After
thorough
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 analysis of
this
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 subject, it is predicted that researchers will investigate
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 better
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 to use
online
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an online
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 environment for
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business
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 opportunity,
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then
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and then
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 the number of online
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business
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businesses
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 working will be increased more in the future.
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