your local hospital has advertised for people to do some unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. in your letter - explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear manager, I am writing
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letter to you to draw your attention to the recent advertisement which was about voluntary work in your hospital.
Firstly
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, I should say, I always like to have an experience in unpaid work.
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, I try to be a useful citizen of my society, it is a good opportunity.
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, I have graduated in accounting
last
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year so, l know about financial issues, as well as, I can guide your customer on Mortgages, loans and other financial problems. Since that, I am a Patience person I think, become a good choice to care for children.
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, I have a part-time job in an accounting company for four days a week,
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I can be available from
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Saturday to Monday for at least two
next
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month. Thank you for taking your time and your consideration of my letter, I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Salehi
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