Teenagers who commit serious crimes, such as burglary or murder, should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion?

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have teenager criminals undergo the same penalties as

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adult or not. In

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I am going to examine the question from both points of view and

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explain why I believe that having the same treatment regardless of age has a stronger

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. There are people that argue that the benefits of having the same consequences for youth criminals considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing

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is that young

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may end up repeating the same intolerable act if they are dealt with lighter penalties. A

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is that adults may use

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as a way to achieve

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criminal acts, as they are dealt with lighter consequences. One illustration of

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is, adults taking advantage of

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that are in need of help, and forces to take illegal acts in order to achieve

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purpose, whilst getting the

children

out of large

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On the other hand

, others believe that young criminals should not be treated equally as an adult. People often find

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opinion, since they believe that it is the

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responsibility for letting their

children

behave in that matter. A

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, which aligns similar to the

first

point

is the fact that adolescence does not have the full mental capacity to decide whether the act is tolerable or not. A

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good example of

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would be how legal documents can not be signed by

children

. In conclusion, I believe that both arguments have their own merits. On balance,

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, I feel that adolescence and adults should have the same teat against their false

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.

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is because, it is important to send signals that acting for murder and

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is a faulty action, and

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not forgiven even as a child.