ome people think that health care is a basic human necessity that should not be provided by provided private companies. But should be provided by state. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of health care being provided by the private sector
Health
is one of the most important things in people's lives. There is an opinion saying that medical services ought to be supplied by the government Use synonyms
instead
of the private sector. There are both merits and demerits associated with private Linking Words
health
care systems, so Use synonyms
patients
need to take these sides into consideration before making any decision.
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To begin
with, the supply of Linking Words
health
care in exclusive centres has a variety of benefits. Use synonyms
Firstly
, coming to the private sector, Linking Words
patients
can be treated with modern facilities and highly qualified doctors as well as a good service attitude, which gives them a sense of satisfaction. Use synonyms
For example
, researchers have shown that in Da Nang, the percentage of citizens happy with private companies is higher than that of state-owned hospitals, which are 91,4% and 68,5% respectively. Linking Words
Secondly
, compared to the public hospital, procedures Linking Words
such
as filling out the Linking Words
health
check-up form, operations or consultants function more rapidly because the public tends to choose hospitals controlled by the state to cure their diseases, Use synonyms
thus
lessening the number of Linking Words
patients
attending private sectors.
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On the other hand
, individual healthcare has various problems with its cost and the treatment it provides. Since the clinics of private organizations are equipped with the latest facilities as I mentioned above, the fee is so high that only wealthy people can afford it. Linking Words
Besides
, the main objective of these Linking Words
centers
is to make as much money as they can, so it is obvious the payment for treatment and medicine is much higher than that of the state-owned hospital. Change the spelling
centres
In addition
, various private sectors do not have any required qualifications and are functioning illegally. These organizations may have wrong treatments for Linking Words
patients
and put their lives at risk. Use synonyms
For instance
, it is reported that there was a death in an unqualified beauty salon in Hanoi.
In conclusion, medical services supplied by the private sector have both positive and negative sides. Residents need to be wise and cautious before deciding to go to a private centre.Linking Words
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