You live in an English-speaking country and you want to so some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. - Explian why you want to do the voluntary work. - State what your skilld and experience are.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request enrollment in one of your upcoming voluntary social work trips to India

month. As your company Cultural Expeditions organizes trips to developing countries for voluntary workers, I would really appreciate

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I can get a seat reserved for the

month's trip to India. Since India is my home country, I believe I should contribute to its development in some way or the other. I am studying here in London and I have a summer break of 2 months starting the 1st of

month, so I am available for the complete period of time. As I believe in contributing my bit to

the

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society, I would like to teach some unfortunate children whose parents can not afford to pay for their school education. I hope they are willing to learn about social science and I can help them make a better future. Since I am currently pursuing Post-Graduation Diploma in Social Science, I feel I should attain some practical knowledge in the field.

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NGO back home and I have done similar

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of work there. Apart from that, I am very patient and empathetic, so I am sure I am fit to teach youngsters. I hope I will get enrolled in the

trip organized by your company. Awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Jay Arora

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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thirdly
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moreover
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for example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

235 words

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