Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

​Some people assume that

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the loss

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of particular species of

plants

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and

animals

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were

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one of the most important environmental issues.

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, others believe that there are more significant environmental

problems

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. ​ On one hand,

plants

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are essential to make the world pleasant and the

existing

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of

animals

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in the wild can make the environment perfect.

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,

plants

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absorb the carbon dioxide which comes from the atmosphere and

emits

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the

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oxygen which makes the atmosphere fresh and is vital not only for humans but

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for

animals

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. After that, the world can be pleasing if it is surrounded by

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various kinds of

plants

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.

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, the lives of the

animals

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depend on

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in some cases

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as there are some

plants

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which are medicinal for

animals

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and there are many

plants

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which are consumed by the

animals

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. And

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, the habitat of the wildlife can affect

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environmental issues. If there is declining in

population

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the population

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of wildlife, the jungle cannot be pleasing. ​

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, there are more significant environmental

problems

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such

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as

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landslides

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, floods and global warming. These environmental

problems

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can impact people’s possessions and accommodation. When there is flooding in some

area

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areas

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of the world, the fields of farmers are destroyed.

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, the houses of residents are ravaged by the landslide. It takes a long time to repair these areas which are destroyed by these environmental

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.

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, global warming can make the environment unpleasant. ​ In conclusion, every environmental issue plays important

roles

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in our daily lives.

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, we must pay attention

on

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to

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every case which is associated with our environment.