In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in water, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Plastic wastes from
industries
are harmful to both plants and animals
. Countries are of the opinion that rubber shopping bags should be prohibited as more negative effects are seen than the
positive ones. I strongly believe Correct article usage
apply
with
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in
this
notion, as it bring
about both unhealthy plant and animal.
Change the verb form
brings
To begin
with refuse from plastics which are channelled in oceans or land by industries
cause poor growth of farm crops. As sewages from industry can reduce the quality of soil
. Most factories channel their wastes to the ocean where farmers use the same ocean for irrigation, which Add an article
the soil
act
as a prevention of photosynthesis to take place as well as poor intake of essential nutrients by crops. Correct subject-verb agreement
acts
For instance
, in Nigerian news 2003
, a commercial farmer used Change preposition
in 2003
ocean
as a means of irrigation I.e. underground water, recorded low farm output due to methods of disposal of most companies. Regulation or recycling should be adopted.
Add an article
the ocean
Furthermore
, majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
animals
are affects
especially Change the verb form
are affected
the
aquatic Correct article usage
apply
animals
and human territory. Refuse dumped in the stream Correct your spelling
reduces the
reducesthe
oxygen level in the water. Correct your spelling
reduces
Also
, fumes produced by plastic industries
pollute the atmosphere or environment, which are toxic to man and damage of
some organs can occur. Change preposition
to
For example
, a man who works with
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in
a
plastic chair industry was diagnosed recently of having lung disease. Correct article usage
the
Industries
should be located out of human buildings and we'll equipment provided for employees.
In conclusion, it has resulted to
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in
negative
impact Correct article usage
a negative
for
society. I completely agree that polythene bags should be banned as it a threat to both plants and Change preposition
on
animals
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite