Parents put a lot of pressure on children to succeed. Do you think this is a good or bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Children are constantly under

pressure

to excel in academics and

life

by

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their parents.

However

, parents who

does

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this

might not understand the negative effect it has on their

child

namely mental health problems and bad parental-

child

relationship. But some view

this

thing

beneficial

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in ways like giving

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a child

the child

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child

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children

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a direction in

life

and overcoming their laziness.

This

essay will discuss the consequences of pressurizing in both aspects. On the on hand, any kind of

pressure

directly

affect

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one's brain and

hence

their

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mental health.

Furthermore

, if

this

mental health persists for a long time, it will lead them into a vortex of depression, a dreadful condition. If

this

happens they will not be able to focus on their

currents

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goal, let alone have flying marks and succeed in

life

.

Secondly

, young might start seeing their

upbringers

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upbringings

up bringers

as nothing but an authoritarian

mother

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mothers

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and

father

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fathers

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and

as a

result

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it is highly possible that they would start getting away from their parents at an early age itself. Alternatively,

forcefullness

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forcefulness

forgetfulness

, though not constant, when put on someone who does not have any kind of direction in

life

yeilds

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yields

desirable results. If done in a sensible way, children might look up to their up bringers as their role models and motivation to

do

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be successful follows.

Additionally

, a

child

who is not involved in any activity like sports,

dance

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or dance

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and does not perform well

at

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in

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academics

also

, is really in need

for

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some

pressure

. Positively,

this

will help him overcome his inactiveness and ultimately, have some

goal

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goals

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to

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fulfil

fullfill

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fulfil

. To sum up, I believe pressurizing a

child

depends on

it

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its

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current

curremt

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current

situation. If they are already doing quite well in academics or have some other hobby, no

pressure

but encouragement is

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necessary

neccessary

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necessary

for them to be successful.

However

, if

pressure

is what a

child

needs,

then

it must be guarded and any kind of overpressure must be avoided.