Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parent's generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

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,
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, we see many differences in our and in our
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generation
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. There are a
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of things which make many differences in one
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and in the
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. In my opinion, I agree with the statement and I think the
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of the internet and the development of
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sources are the two main factors, which make a significant contrast between my
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and my
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's
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, which I will explore in
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, as an initial point, I would like to say that nowadays the
facility
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of the Internet has changed so many things,
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as the
use
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of social media, online studies, smartphones, smartwatches and many more. During my
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there was no
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facility
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and
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they have to spend a
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of
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managing their routine work.
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, My parents used to tell me that to talk with their friends, who are living very far, they either have to write a letter to them or have to book a call for communication, which is very easy in the present scenario. Nowadays, I just have to do a message on phone or on my social account and instantly I get in touch with any of our friends, it doesn't matter where they are living.
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is the development of
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sources. Today, we have various ways of
transportation
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; either by bus, car, train, ship or aeroplane and their
facility
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improved a
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from my
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's
time
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. Now for the shortest distance
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we have an aeroplane
facility
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or we can
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our own aircraft. But, at the
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of my ,parents everything was present; the bus, car, ship, train and aeroplane but their number and frequency was very less and
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, for the shortest distance they have to
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either a bus or their own car. In conclusion, I believe that
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the Internet and development in
transportation
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have changed a
lot
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of stuff nowadays, which was not present during my parents'
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period.
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