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How can we balance the right to free speech with the right to not be insulted or abused?

#balance #right #speech
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In
this
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 contemporary world,
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 related to the
rights
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 of individuals
is
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 a ubiquitous concern, as so many are struggling with it.
Majority
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 of
people
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 find it difficult to maintain a balance between the
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rights
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 for speaking fluently and
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the rights
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rights
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for
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not to
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 humiliated by other
people
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. There
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number
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 of
problems
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 regarding
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this
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 controversial issue but
also
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 some straightforward measures in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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 and foremost, the worst problem stemming from
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 is
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 unawareness of
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, because we must not neglect that fact nowadays most
people
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 do not recognize the law. They are not aware of speeches that should be spoken and should not. One example
that
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people
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 always talk
in
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 an inappropriate time,
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, in many cases
people
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 are abused by others.
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, another larger problem is that plethora of individuals are not
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, the main reason
that
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 they usually speak about irrelevant topics which can offend other
people
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. Free speech
is not speak
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is not spoken
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 whatever and whenever
people
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 desire to say, it means that
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people are
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people have
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rights
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 to suggest their opinions fluently, without any force. If we turn to the possible solutions, we should take into consideration
individual`s
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an individual`s
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 speech, especially
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its appropriateness and its literacy as well. Apparently,
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 parents and teachers indeed. Another way
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to tackle
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 challenge is that increasing
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awareness, all humans should be accustomed to comprehending the law from
early
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the early
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 period of time.Either teachers
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 parents must explain
them
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to them
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 their
rights
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,
understanding
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and understanding
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 of
law
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the law
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. If
people
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 know what
rights
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 they have, they definitely will not be insulted by others.
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, individuals could opine their points of view free, simultaneously without any violence.
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, they would be able to keep
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 between these personal
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. All things considered, the key
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 of balancing
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rights
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 to fluent speech and
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the rights
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be
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 offended by others can be addressed through a combination of awareness, laws and better performance of these actions. After fulfilling these remedies, all these aforementioned
problems
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 would be resolved.
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