In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

The publicity choices are likely to change over the years. Recently, re-used clothes are highly considered by both teenagers and adolescents. I think the immense increase in the usage of
this
type of clothes is
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influenced
by several measures.
For instance
, the awareness level of the buyers themselves, and the
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economic situation.
Firstly
, due to the dynamic life we are living now, teenagers tend to wear multiple outfits during the same day for different purposes
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us
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, midday activities, and evening outings.
Secondly
, younger generations have become more conscious
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the
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efficiency
effeciency
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efficiency
of buying.
In other words
, most of them apparently purchase multiple items rather than spending much money
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one or two outfits. On the other
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, mostly in the developing countries, the
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unemployment
unemployement
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unemployment
level is increasing dramatically alongside the annually ascending inflation rate
Thus
, the major publicity,
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the mid-aged layer cannot afford
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first class
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brands.
Additionally
, some
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governments
governemnts
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governments
in the well-developed
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countries
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countries
adopt the recycling theory resulting in the increased
tendancy
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tendency
for the public to explore the flea market. A recent study
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that flea market trading has increased by 50% in the
last
2 years. To conclude, over the past few years,
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publicity
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awareness has
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great impact on
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teenagers
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choice to buy clothes. In
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to the alternating socio-economic factors all over the globe.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Pre-owned garments
  • Affordable
  • Vintage
  • Mainstream
  • Mass-produced
  • Online marketplaces
  • Self-expression
  • Recycling
  • Consumption model
  • Hygiene issues
  • Counterfeit products
  • Cultural shift
  • Materialism
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