Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it is thought by some people that experts,
such
as doctors and engineers, should not migrate to another
country
and
instead
, they should apply their knowledge at the place where their training had been done while Others believe that it would not be fair to do so. In
this
essay, both perspectives will be discussed and my own opinion will be given.  For two reasons, it is wise to think that it would be
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best not to allow
professionals
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their workplace.
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idea might be the familiarity with the atmosphere.
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means that they would not face
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many hardships in their specializations since they know well the nature of the public in that nation.
As a result
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become productive but
also
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satisfaction. Admittedly, another reason is the concern of
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and government.
For instance
,
although
a
country
has the perfect training centre, if the
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there choose to work in different countries, people start to worry that there will not be enough experts in that nation.
On the other hand
, allowing
professionals
to freely migrate to their desired destinations might be an advantage for them due to one striking reason.
That is
the probability of job opportunities.
In other words
, finding a job will be a lot easier.
For example
, if a university student graduated from one of the universities in a high-standard
country
full of experts,
then
being employed would be a rare occasion for a graduated student who is at the average level. But, if he migrates to another nation, the probability figure could be increased. In conclusion, not letting
professionals
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might result in public fulfilment.
However
, experts’
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need to be taken into consideration, too. From my point of view, I believe it would be better to allow them to choose their workplace so that they could do their job with passion and give excellent service.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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