The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

In contemporary

society

,

due to

the development of technology, the interest in nuclear

weapons

has increased. The

threat

of nuclear

weapons

could be beneficial to our

society

such

as inventing technology,

however

, I

also

believe

this

has harmful effects on not only

society

but

also

citizens

's lives so that it can't maintain world peace.

Firstly

, nuclear

weapons

can influence people's standard of life negatively. What I am concerned about is that the atmosphere of

society

will be frustrated when

citizens

are aware of nuclear. In South

Korea

,

for instance

, people have prepared for an emergency situation because the public has felt scared about the nuclear

weapons

of North

Korea

. Sometimes we purchase an essential good just in case.

This

creates a dark atmosphere among Koreans, which has led to discontentment

of

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our country.

Therefore

, I think the

threat

of nuclear

weapons

affects the

citizens

and, thereby

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world peace cannot be continued.

In contrast

, there are some advantages when we are threatened by nuclear

weapons

. To invent nuclear

weapons

, a lot of scientific research is crucial which allows our

society

to improve.

In other words

, thanks to

this

research, we could use various technology devices and vehicles which we cannot live without.

Furthermore

, the government's policies on safety have been enhanced because of threats.

For example

, we have lived under the

threat

of North

Korea

's nuclear

weapons

, our government made a law about protection and they made a lot of efforts to convince North

Korea

not to shoot nuclear

weapons

.

This

has contributed to our

society

more and more safe.

To sum up

,

although

our

society

can recognize the

threat

of nuclear

weapons

to protect ourselves, I believe the

threat

of nuclear

weapons

cannot maintain world peace because it can interfere with people's safety authority which makes the

citizens

depressed. I hope there will be no nuclear threats in the future.