The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

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the development of technology, the interest in nuclear

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has increased. The

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of nuclear

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could be beneficial to our

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as inventing technology,

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has harmful effects on not only

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citizens

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's lives so that it can't maintain world peace.

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, nuclear

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can influence people's standard of life negatively. What I am concerned about is that the atmosphere of

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will be frustrated when

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are aware of nuclear. In South

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,

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, people have prepared for an emergency situation because the public has felt scared about the nuclear

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of North

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. Sometimes we purchase an essential good just in case.

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creates a dark atmosphere among Koreans, which has led to discontentment

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our country.

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, I think the

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of nuclear

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affects the

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world peace cannot be continued.

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, there are some advantages when we are threatened by nuclear

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. To invent nuclear

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, a lot of scientific research is crucial which allows our

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to improve.

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research, we could use various technology devices and vehicles which we cannot live without.

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, the government's policies on safety have been enhanced because of threats.

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, we have lived under the

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of North

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's nuclear

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, our government made a law about protection and they made a lot of efforts to convince North

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not to shoot nuclear

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.

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has contributed to our

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more and more safe.

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our

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can recognize the

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of nuclear

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to protect ourselves, I believe the

threat

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of nuclear

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cannot maintain world peace because it can interfere with people's safety authority which makes the

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depressed. I hope there will be no nuclear threats in the future.