You are arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter. Explain the important event. Apologise for the situation. Suggest a new arrangements.

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Dear Anna , Hope you are doing well. I hereby

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. Hope you can arrange a short break from your hectic work

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in December. See you soon. Regards, Krishna.

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Some people believe that international news should be included in the syllabus of secondary school students. Do you agree or disagree?

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