You are arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter. Explain the important event. Apologise for the situation. Suggest a new arrangements.

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Dear Anna , Hope you are doing well. I hereby

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letter to inform you that I made a change in my upcoming trip to Canada. My father's brother's retirement party will be held on 14/10/2022. So ,

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the same time. He has been working at Rajagiri hospital as a neurologist

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I want to give him a warm welcome back party. You know

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immense role in my life

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applied for two

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leave for the same. Sorry for the

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suggestions from

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to you. Let's

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the ecstatic vacation in

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December.It will be amazing especially

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climate in December is

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. Hope you can arrange a short break from your hectic work

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in December. See you soon. Regards, Krishna.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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