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Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #students #ability
Nowadays, there are
people
 who consider academic ability to be
an important criteria
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an important criterion
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 for dividing
students
 in terms of their education programmes and others who think that all
students
 should be educated together. I am an advocate of the importance of making
differences
 between
students
 regarding their
abilities
 and the essay will explain both points of view and give examples.
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Firstly
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Firtsly
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Firstly
, the
differences
 between humans are the ones that
makes
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make
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 each of us unique in our own way.
This
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differences
 are seen mostly in our
appereances
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appearances
appearance
 but
also
 in our native or gained
abilities
 in the process of learning. Educating
students
 differently based on their unique powers will raise
wll
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will
well
all
-prepared
people
 for different work fields.
Moreover
, a good differentiation between youngsters gives them self-confidence and power to
aknowledge
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acknowledge
 their own
caracteristics
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characteristics
, to work on their skills and prepare for a job that they are good at. For
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,
students
 who have charismatic skills and the ability to speak in public will have
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successful
successfully
succesfull
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successful
 jobs in management, teaching and politics.
Thus
, preparing them in
this
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these
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 areas would give
the
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them the
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 possibility to follow a dream carrier.
Furthermore
, raising the
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awareness
awarness
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awareness
 of
students
 concerning their
abilities
 should lower
on
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in
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long
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 term, the number of unemployed young
people
 who do not know what job suites them well.
Secondly
, making
differences
 between
students
 could affect their self-esteem and have a huge negative impact on their professional course. Youngsters with less academic
abilities
 will probably try harder or even leave school. Those drawbacks will affect
students
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students'
student's
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academic
acadmic
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academic
, personal and working life.
For instance
,
students
 with low self-esteem could see the
differences
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like
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as
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 a chance to compete with themselves but
a
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as a
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desolation. To sum up, I believe that we should always see the good in
people
 and an academic ability
differention
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differentiation
differential
 among
students
 would have more positive effects than drawbacks.
Submitted by cristina.mada12 on

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