Some people believes that it is wrong to keep animals in zoo while other thinks that zoos are important for education and conservation .Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Animal keeping is always a debatable topic .Several individuals are at the notion that protecting wildlife inside a zoo is an erroneous way whereas another group of people acclaimed that zoos and national parks are crucial for imparting knowledge to sophomores as well as serving as a

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benefit .

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,apart from my ,

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both viewpoints are justified

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. Focusing on the former's view ;it's an evil

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to locate

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under strict supervision in a cage .The utmost reason

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unavailability of freedom practices .

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is to state that

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have to face a few challenges in order to feed themselves .

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,a lion decides his prey according to his choice whereas a stringent dietary pattern of

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houses avail food items according to the situation .

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, it seems to be animal brutality .

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, the ecosystem will be affected .The reason is , that the food cycle process continues from the producers to consumers .

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tertiary consumers are kept under a

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shelter yet the cycling process may be endangered.

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view ,schools of thought determine that zoo serves an educational purpose for sophomores .To commence with ,wildlife life learning becomes quite easier .That a real depiction of

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to younger ones creates a real picture in one's mind .

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,sanctuaries and national park are been prepared for

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purposes.To add to

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,protecting wildlife species and preventing

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from theft is a major objective.

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, a monthly checkup of creatures helps to prevent life-threatening disorders in the animal kingdom .

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,Gir sanctuary ,well known for lion species provides a regular veterinary checkup which helps to rule out disease conditions. In conclusion ,I firmly believe

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should be under supervision because they might endanger the life of human beings .Though authority should keep an eye over national parks to ensure the stability of

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