Some believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?
With the development of social equality,
gender
equality has become a heated topics
. While some think that Correct the article-noun agreement
topic
women
have right
to do any Correct article usage
the right
job
they want, others believe that women
cannot do some special jobs
. Personally, I do agree
the view that there should not have any limitations on Add the preposition
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withagree
women
's choice
, they can do any Fix the agreement mistake
choices
job
they want.
In terms of individuals, the stereotype
that women
are not suitable to do certain works have
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has
an adverse effects
not only for Correct the article-noun agreement
an adverse effect
adverse effects
women
,
but for men. On the one hand, Remove the comma
apply
Once
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apply
this
thought that women
only suit some low-paying jobs
such
as nurses, secretaries, teachers and healthy workers forms a stereotype
, which is not beneficial to bridging the gender
pay gap. If the gender
pay gap is widen
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widened
women
are reluctant to go to work, which means they are more likely to experience domestic violence because they depend on their husband
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On the other hand
, this
stereotype
will develop a
discrimination. One man, Remove the article
apply
for instance
, who are interested in teaching children but because of this
gender
stereotype
will do a job
he dislike
, which will lower his well-being.
Obviously, Change the verb form
dislikes
such
detrimental effects also
have a knock-on impact throughout society. Taken
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Taking
jobs
as an example, there is a stereotype
that women
are not suitable in
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political
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the political
a political
job
. If a country's political officials are all men, the country's laws made by men will Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
favor
males, which undermines Change the spelling
favour
women
's rights. For
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From
an
stable perspective, Change the article
a
this
job
discrimination will lead to more gender
conflicts that will damage a country's cohesion.
In conclusion, while it is true that there are still are
stereotypes that Unnecessary verb
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women
are not good at particularly jobs
, it is problematic that some still keeps
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keep
this
discrimination. This
view inevitably has negative impacts on individuals' physical and mental health, as well as the cohesion of communities.Submitted by 1980987589 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite