Some believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

With the development of social equality,

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equality has become a heated

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. While some think that

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have

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to do any

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they want, others believe that

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cannot do some special

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. Personally, I do

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the view that there should not have any limitations on

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choice

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, they can do any

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they want. In terms of individuals, the

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that

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are not suitable to do certain works

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an adverse effects

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not only for

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but for men. On the one hand,

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thought that

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only suit some low-paying

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such

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as nurses, secretaries, teachers and healthy workers forms a

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, which is not beneficial to bridging the

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pay gap. If the

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pay gap is

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,

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are reluctant to go to work, which means they are more likely to experience domestic violence because they depend on their

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.

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,

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will develop

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discrimination. One man,

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, who are interested in teaching children but because of

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gender

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will do a

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he

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, which will lower his well-being. Obviously,

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detrimental effects

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have a knock-on impact throughout society.

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executive

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as an example, there is a

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that

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are not suitable

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political

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job

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. If a country's political officials are all men, the country's laws made by men will

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males, which undermines

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's rights.

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stable perspective,

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discrimination will lead to more

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conflicts that will damage a country's cohesion. In conclusion, while it is true that there are still

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stereotypes that

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are not good at particularly

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, it is problematic that some still

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discrimination.

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view inevitably has negative impacts on individuals' physical and mental health, as well as the cohesion of communities.