You’ve read an article about the company you work for in a business magazine. The article contains information that is wrong. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • give details of the magazine • explain what information about your company is wrong • suggest what you think your manager should do

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to provide you with information about the recent present

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business magazine. I have read all in the book which the company that I am working with,

Thus

, I found a mistake from the ending of the magazine. At

first

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one of

employees

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we usually publish about the restaurant business but the problem is some of

staffs

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that provide the way to achieve was wrong meaning,

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, the picture was not correct.

Secondly

,

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trouble will not happen if all staff carefully reviews properly.

However

, I would like to suggest you

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edit it as soon as possible.

Therefore

, the company will be treated still be believable.

Lastly

, we will find out the reason

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this

issue

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prevention.

In addition

,

this

situation is a basic, I

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this

problem will not occur with our company in the future. Thank you Sincerely your Pair