In some countries,a few people earn extremely high salaries.Some people think that this is food for a country,while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Nowadays with the development of the world salaries are increasing day by day.So some
people
believe that salary
increment is useful for the country
,others
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and others
people
ʼs are limited and should be controlled by the government.This
essay will explain both sideʼs opinions.
On the one hand,it might be said that,
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peopleʼs
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people's
salary
rising can bring some benefit to the country
.Firstly
,the person gets a lot of job
satisfaction from himself or herself work.Secondly
,this
may even be more motivating than the low salary
and workers endeavour to enhance their job
productivity.Furthermore
, they sacrifice their work.As a
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this
can bring a lot of benefits to the country
such
as job
efficiency increasing,the numberʼs crime reduction.Because many people
even state workers commit an immense offence if it is low their salary
.For example
, my cousin has an extremely high salary
.So his job
productivity is very high- capacity .Furthermore
, he helps the majority of needy patients who come from poor families and suffer from different diseases.
Conversely
, people
having extraordinary earnings can take some risks for the demographics of the society, like this
pecking order and discrimination among the people
.Besides
, some an employee trade on the country
's faith,maybe corruption,bribery and so on who has high earnings.
To sum up, both sideʼs opinions are entirely justified.As we see above, people
earning tremendously high salaries has
advantages and disadvantages features.Correct subject-verb agreement
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