For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter - state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this - give details on how you have benefited from the club - explain why you want to leave

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing with regard to discontinuing my Gold Premium membership at the Gymkhana

Club

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. My name is Jerry Brown, and I am a premium member of the

club

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Although

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I availed

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this

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of this

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membership about 6 months back only, I would have to discontinue

because

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it because

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of some personal reasons. Since I pay for it on a quarterly basis, I believe all my dues are clear

till

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date. Still, if there is anything that I have to settle before leaving,

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please let me know. I would like to share my experience while I was a part of the

club

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. I thoroughly enjoyed visiting the place in the evenings. As the amenities at the

club

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are stupendous, more and more people are opting

the

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for the

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club

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over others in the town. Undoubtedly, it is a premium one where one can avail various facilities from sauna to gym and much more. Unfortunately, I am moving to another town because I have changed my job. As the

club

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is not available there, I do not have any other option but to cancel my membership

for

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the future. I would definitely give your

club

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a five-star rating and would recommend it to my friends in town. For

further

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communication, you could contact me on the number in

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club's

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the club's

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records. It was

pleasure

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a pleasure

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being a part of the

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. Yours sincerely, Jerry Brown

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

230 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

polite greeting
membership cancellation
benefited
annual/monthly/family/individual membership
credit card/direct debit/cash payment
positive experiences
social interactions
fitness improvements
personal reasons
financial constraints
relocation
change in interests
gratitude
procedure
notice period
courteous explanation
future rejoining
sign-off

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