Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Recently, the number of
people
with sicknesses who are using unusual
medicines
and
treatments
has been growing, and they replaced
this
method with visiting doctors. In my opinion, it is a negative development that will be discussed in
this
essay.
Firstly
, all
medicines
and
treatments
have side
effects
, and they can hurt other parts of the human body.
Therefore
, before selecting
treatments
it is crucial to analyse the side
effects
, and the only person who can do
this
is a
doctor
. If
people
start treating themselves without visiting a
doctor
, small health problems could become critical ones and hurt their lives.
For example
,if a man has pain in his back
instead
of going to the
doctor
try to use some
medicines
or massage. After a while, his pain gets worse and other parts of his body have pain.
Secondly
, some
treatments
have bad
effects
which
people
do not realise , but when they get older those
effects
will appear.
Furthermore
, those
effects
can cause death or if there is any way to treat them it takes a lot of time.
For instance
, nowadays fat
people
are trying unusual ways to lose weight but in a long term, those ways cause a lot of problems for them. In conclusion, if
people
use
medicines
and
treatments
without visiting a
doctor
, they put themselves in a critical situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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