The widespread of the Internet gives people more freedom to work and study at home instead of traveling to office and school. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

With the development of science and technology,

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is widely applied in various industries and fields, which allowed people to work and study at

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rather than commute to work or do to school. I think

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change has more benefits.

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and foremost, working online is environmental sound. With the reduction of commute

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vehicles will run on the road, which means less air pollution of emissions.

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, working and studying at

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is economical. There would be

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expenses for corporations if they do not have to pay office rent. And the fees for online courses are more acceptable relatively because they can be recorded and sold to millions of students.

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, employees and students can accompany their families while working and learning at

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.

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can deepen the relationship between families to a tremendous extent.

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but not at least,

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is saved as individuals stay at

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and do not spend

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travelling.

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, they have more

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to do exercise, which can enhance citizens’ physical fitness. Admittedly, there are some defects regarding

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working and studying at

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. Students are more likely to be distracted due to videos and games on the internet. It would

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lead to

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the inefficiency

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working at

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if employees are attracted by other things.

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, these problems can be tackled if proper management and supervision

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. To conclude, I hold the view that the advantages of working and studying at

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exceed the disadvantages in the long term.