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Students should pay the full cost of their own studies because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that
society
 should not support
students
for
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 their tuition because they would receive more benefits after graduation than
society
.
However
, I disagree with
this
 viewpoint and will explain why in the following essay. University graduates could be a company recruiter's top choice for employment. They might often have a better income than those without a degree, allowing them to attain a higher standard of living compared with the average member of
society
. In Vietnam, those who work in industries that require degrees,
such
 as lawyers, doctors, etc., typically enjoy a higher standard of living than those who lack a degree. They could afford more of life's luxuries for themselves and their family: a home, a car, and travel... I support the
viewpoint
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 that
society
 should assist
students
 in covering their educational expenses. Because
students
 can often cover a portion of their education costs through part-time work, they still require assistance from their families and the community. After graduation, they would have more opportunities to become successful and wealthy members of
society
, so they would pay off their student loans and contribute more to the general welfare by paying higher personal taxes.
In addition
, they may be able to start their own businesses and create a large number of employment opportunities for
society
, thereby lowering the unemployment rate and fostering economic growth. In conclusion, despite the fact that some people believe that
students
 should pay the full cost of their education, I still believe that
society
 should provide them with some financial assistance.
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