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You have a neighbor who is often burning rubbish at their house. Write a complaint about it to the local council and say – What is happening? – How is your family harmed by that? – What could be the solution, in your opinion?

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Dear John, I noted that you burned your used
furniture
 a few times
this
 year. I would like to say these were
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dangerous concept
that is
 beyond our imagination. Please be noticed that
this
 action could destroy your house and our neighbourhood if anything might have happened. Please be aware that if I see you have
this
 practice one more time, I will submit a complaint letter to our management office.
Thus
, the policeman will issue a penalty notice to you for your action. I remember that you burned lots of wooden
furniture
 on 01 July 2011. I had tried to remind you that if you burn wooden
furniture
 in the windy summertime, which might have a chance that our neighbourhood will be destroyed by fire. You told us that you were closely monitoring and that will not have any problem.
However
, I found out that all the grasses in my backyard were destroyed and burned. Luckily, my daughter didn't go to the backyard to play with my dog. You did not keep your promise to closely monitor the status, as I saw you went back to your house and watched television. I was so shocked by your attitude. From my perspective, you need to contact with management office at the Community Centre as they will come to your house to collect the largely used
furniture
 services every month. You can
also
 consider contacting one of the charities organisation, which will collect your used
furniture
. We hope that
this
 dangerous exercise will not have happened again. Yours faithfully, XXXXXXX
Submitted by ABC_XYZ on

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