Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

These days tourism is bigger than ever, and everyone has their own favourite tour style. Personally, I think it is a really great idea to travel with a partner. I feel
this
way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, going on a trip with a companion is more economical than vacationing alone.
As a result
of leisure excursions becoming more and more popular, hotel operators have raised their prices to astronomical levels. Discounts for solo travellers are fairly uncommon nowadays, so sharing a room with a friend is an effective way to cut costs. Not only that, but people travelling in pairs have better access to package deals on tours, entrance fees and other activities. My own experience is compelling evidence of
this
. When my girlfriend and I travelled together through Peru
last
year, we were able to rent an entire hotel room for less than the cost of two separate beds in a shared dorm. Over the course of our month-long expedition, we saved several hundred dollars in
this
way. Because we saved so much money, we were able to change our plans and extend our trek for almost an entire week. Had we not taken the tour together, we would not have been able to do that.
Moreover
, it is much easier to talk to local people when travelling in a pair, and
this
makes the expedition much more rewarding.
While
a lone stranger can be seen as intimidating, a travelling couple is often considered more approachable.
For instance
, when my girlfriend and I took the trip to South America that I mentioned above, we were often welcomed into people’s homes and businesses with open arms. The individuals who invited us often pointed out that they were willing to do so because we looked so happy, friendly and cheerful spending time together.
In contrast
, when I visited Bolivia by myself the previous year, I wanted to make the same kinds of connections, but it was almost impossible to achieve my goal. It is true that a solitary traveller may actually be quite kind and outgoing,
this
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but this
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can be somewhat difficult to determine from a distance. In conclusion, I definitely prefer to travel with a companion rather than alone.
This
is because there are significant financial benefits of doing in
this
manner and because travelling with a partner makes it easy to interact with strangers.
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task response
Ensure to address every key point in the prompt and provide detailed explanations for your reasons and examples. Make sure to stay on topic and fully answer the question. Gradually present the arguments for and against travelling with or without a companion.
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A well-developed structure is present with an introduction, body, and conclusion. However, ensure that the essay has a clear and logical progression of ideas within paragraphs and between them. Use a variety of cohesive devices to link ideas and provide a smooth flow of thought for the reader.
lexical resource
Vocabulary and phrases are generally appropriate, and word choice is mostly accurate. However, strive for a wider range of vocabulary and more precise and sophisticated language to express ideas effectively.
grammatical range
There is a good range of grammar and vocabulary, with relatively few errors. However, pay attention to sentence structure and consider using more complex sentences and structures to demonstrate a higher level of proficiency.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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  • such as
  • namely
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