You have just started a cource in a college which has no sport facilities of its own.Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club in your letter. •introduce yourself •say why you are interested in this sport club •ask some questions about the club e.g.facilities,members,costs.

Dear Sir or Madam I am
student
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and I live small city
which
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named
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Mubarek
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Mubarak
.I study
one
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of
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university in
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Tashkent.
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is
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university for studying.
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there is an issue that there isn't
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a sport
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sport
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club
and hasn't any facilities for sport.So I read a lot
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advertisiment
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advertisement
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about
sport
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clubs but yours is
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one for me.And I want to get more information about your
club
. First of
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does your
club
has any certificates
.
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Also
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I would to know about your sports
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's facilities
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condition
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I study in
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for
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that reason I can not join
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.Give me advice
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I would
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be grateful
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whether
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if
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you could tell me the price.You can contact me,and my number is
:
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554014838 I look forward to hearing from you your answers.
Your
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faithfully
Bonu
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Bonus
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introduction
Begin with a proper greeting and clearly introduce yourself, including pertinent details such as your name and the course you are studying.
structure
Frame your letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single point, for better coherence.
grammar and coherence
Correct grammar and punctuation errors, and ensure the proper use of linking words for smoother transitions between ideas.
conclusion
Include a polite closing statement that summarizes your request or expresses anticipation of the recipient’s response.
tone
Use a more formal tone and avoid casual language in formal letters. Additionally, ensure that the letter directly addresses each point listed in the task prompt.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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