Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

The world we live
today
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is
overfloading
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overloading
overflowing
with
wastes
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.
Such
issues have resulted from large
wastes
produced by large
coorperations
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corporations
, including our
overusage
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overuse
over usage
of
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single use
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plastics
.
This
essay would
further
discuss
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why
this
current increase in rubbish is
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occurring
occuring
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occurring
, and develop some solutions which
governments
can do to act against
this
problem. One of the largest reasons behind the current increase in
wastes
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waste
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involve
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large
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amount of rubbish thrown away by chain
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restaurants
restruants
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restaurants
. Despite the notion of not wasting
food
, there are still many people who
does
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not finish their
food
at
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restaurants
restruants
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restaurants
.
In addition
to
this
, there are
also
dishes that were made but had gotten expired.
Therefore
with the increasing numbers of
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restaurants
resutruants
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we see today,
this
also
had increased the
quantity
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of
wastes
.
Furthermore
, from the
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convenience
convinience
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convenience
and the availability of
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single use
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plastics
,
plastic
goods had been another cause of creating more rubbish.
For instance
, the other day when I visited Starbucks there was a significant amount of
plastic
cups thrown away just from sight. Despite the rising
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there are some things
governments
can do to solve
this
.
Firstly
, to fix the problem of expiring foods getting thrown away,
governments
can create a service that would allow
food
services to sell close expiry
food
at
much
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lower price.
Moreover
, to control the usage of
plastics
, country leaders can regulate by imposing taxes on purchasing
such
products. A great illustration of
this
is in
UK
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the UK
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the government had placed taxes on
single used
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plastics
,
this
has resulted in an effective drop in
plastic
wastes
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waste
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. In conclusion,
although
there are worries regarding
to
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increasing waste produced by
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restaurants
restruants
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restaurants
all over the country to
plastic
cups that we see all the time, there
is
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still
hopes
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hope
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for
governments
to reverse
this
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situation
stiuation
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situation
. By implementing services, and regulations, reducing waste will soon become an achievable goal.
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