Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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The world we live

today

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overfloading

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with

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wastes

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issues have resulted from large

wastes

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produced by large

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overuse

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plastics

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why

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current increase in rubbish is

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, and develop some solutions which

governments

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can do to act against

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problem. One of the largest reasons behind the current increase in

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wastes

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involve

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large

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amount of rubbish thrown away by chain

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restaurants

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restaurants

. Despite the notion of not wasting

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, there are still many people who

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not finish their

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restaurants

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this

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, there are

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dishes that were made but had gotten expired.

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with the increasing numbers of

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restaurants

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we see today,

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also

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had increased the

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wastes

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, from the

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convenience

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convenience

and the availability of

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single use

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plastics

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plastic

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goods had been another cause of creating more rubbish.

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, the other day when I visited Starbucks there was a significant amount of

plastic

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cups thrown away just from sight. Despite the rising

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there are some things

governments

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can do to solve

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, to fix the problem of expiring foods getting thrown away,

governments

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can create a service that would allow

food

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services to sell close expiry

food

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much

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lower price.

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, to control the usage of

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, country leaders can regulate by imposing taxes on purchasing

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products. A great illustration of

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is in

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the UK

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the government had placed taxes on

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plastics

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has resulted in an effective drop in

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wastes

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. In conclusion,

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there are worries regarding

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increasing waste produced by

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restaurants

restruants

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restaurants

all over the country to

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cups that we see all the time, there

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still

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for

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to reverse

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situation

stiuation

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. By implementing services, and regulations, reducing waste will soon become an achievable goal.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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309 words

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

You wish to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to the university. In your letter you should ask about: the accommodation and fees possible scholarships and the qualifications required for acceptance.

Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to older more traditional values such as respect for the and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.