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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to the rapid development of technology and artificial intelligence, more and more robots help
humans
 do lots of things in daily life. In the future, the number of people who sit in different transportation and control it will decrease generally,
on the other hand
, passengers in cars or buses may more than before. As far as I am concerned, I think
this
 phenomenon own more benefits than drawbacks.
Computers
 can control widely views from the car than
humans
. There are many angles that the drivers cannot notice during the car running, but robots have abilities to handle numerous images caught by cameras. By quickly and comprehensive calculating, it can make the correct decisions on variable traffic changes. Fixed rules which already set in the system can reduce the rate of traffic accidents. Most people like to break the rules and surpass the limits of speed, and
this
 problem can totally be solved by automatically driving. With an appropriately electronic map,
computers
 can switch to illegal speeds. Long-distance delivery or move will cost lots of energy on
humans
. It is frequently to see lots of traffic accidents due to drivers being too tired or falling asleep. The reason that makes it happen is that do not have enough rest before driving or continue driving over time.
This
 situation can be dealt with by driverless,
computers
 would not be tired but
humans
 will. And the things that
humans
 can do all
computers
 can do
also
, but some of the jobs and skills are difficult or impossible for
humans
. To sum up, the number of drivers will be less than in the past. Me , I accept
this
 viewpoint and I think it will happen as soon as possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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