In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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years will be marked with as advanced technologies as we can hardly imagine today. The
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conspicuous one is related to trans potation systems. It is predicted that
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of divers will be completely cleaned. So, travelling might be carried out only by
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programs which instated on carriages Exactly,
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the
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development
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development
benefits individuals,
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every other progresses negative impacts should not be neglected. In
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driverless
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effective,
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difficulties
, I mean travelling will be easier than now.
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especially
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especially
for older persons. who have been staying at their homes for many years, simply because, their driving licences are
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By way of illustration, my father is about to,
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his transportation to me and my
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siblings
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innovation
defenetly
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definitely
gives assistance to old
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.
Also
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decreasing in traffic, increasing in
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parking
and trips. I really adore the
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paragraph. In as much as, it is extra
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tangible
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for me and my family.
On the other hand
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of problems
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have been maintained would explain that had better consider
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of roads that are unsuitable for autonomous vehicles. Indeed, roads need many facilities for
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element
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from multiple sides.
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,
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vast amount of
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is required.
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, in our country and some other developing country
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and
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have become more volatile. So, governments can't provide
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security
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for
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cars.
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thousands
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will be
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brought
bout.
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controlled
cars are
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a boon nor a ban
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sciaety
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society
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enough
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equipment, It would be beneficial progress.
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community
at risk of waste of essential many and accidents.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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