You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir, I recently completed short cookery

course

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few weeks a

go

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ago

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from your school and have learned and

enjoy

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my

course

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. I

am wring

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latter regarding

give

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giving

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my

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feedback you asked

.

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for.

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of all, I want to let you know that my experience at your school was spectacular. I have learned many new

recipe

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recipes

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and old

recipe

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recipes

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with new technics which helped me to improve my cooking skill. And sheaf

were

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their

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was very

polit

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polite

, helpful and give all answers to my questions.

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, he personally gives every time and

point

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out our mistakes and

teach

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to

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us to

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improve

it

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them

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. After my cooking

course

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completed

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was completed

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, I have throw two small parties

to

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my close friends and prepared all food by

my self

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myself

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. They all like

a

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me a

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lot

,

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apply

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and give

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a compliment

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compliment

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to me. I think

,

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this

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can

be consider

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as

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a

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success

to

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me and as well as your cookery

course

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, before

that

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,that

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I was very bad

in

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at

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cooking.

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, I would like to give

suggestion

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to add more recipes from different cutler

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. which I believe attract more people to your school.

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely,

xyz

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XYZ