You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir, I recently completed short cookery
course
few weeks a
go
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from your school and have learned and
enjoy
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my
course
. I
am wring
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this
latter regarding
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my
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feedback you asked
.
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First
of all, I want to let you know that my experience at your school was spectacular. I have learned many new
recipe
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recipes
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and old
recipe
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recipes
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with new technics which helped me to improve my cooking skill. And sheaf
were
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their
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was very
polit
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polite
, helpful and give all answers to my questions.
Furthermore
, he personally gives every time and
point
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points
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out our mistakes and
teach
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teaches
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to
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us to
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improve
it
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them
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. After my cooking
course
completed
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, I have throw two small parties
to
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my close friends and prepared all food by
my self
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myself
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. They all like
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lot
,
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and give
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compliment
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to me. I think
,
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this
can
be consider
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as
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success
to
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me and as well as your cookery
course
, before
that
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,that
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I was very bad
in
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at
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cooking.
Although
, I would like to give
suggestion
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suggestions
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to add more recipes from different cutler
also
. which I believe attract more people to your school.
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sincerely,
xyz
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XYZ
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