Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh disadvantages?

Every student dreams of getting a world-class
education
from a renowned institute
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and choosing a major or an institute is a daunting decision that they make in their lives. It is not always possible to visit a different country or state for higher
education
and
thus
, many are opting for distant
education
these days. In
this
essay, I will contend how it is advantageous and what disadvantages it can have. In my view,
although
it is a matter of choice and individuals should weigh both positives and negatives depending on their circumstances, it is best to have offline
education
.
To begin
with,
students
who prefer
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mode of
education
, so so probably because of two reasons.
One
is,
online
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education
is far less expensive and affordable for many than
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offline
one
. Certainly, if a student,
for instance
, is studying abroad and has to visit their homeland after every 6 months
then
they have to bear the
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air travel
cost.
Moreover
, they have to bear accommodation, food and other living costs. Another reason for choosing
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mode of study is homesickness, which is a major
one
for many individuals. They prefer to stay with their families and wish to get a degree from their dream institute as well,
therefore
, the best option for them is
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in an online course at a university of their choice. There are,
however
, a few disadvantages of
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mode of study as well.
First
of all, college life doesn't come back. It is probably once or twice in your
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that you get to experience it, and I believe,
this
is
one
reason why some do not let go of the opportunity to be physically present at the college/university
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they are studying. It is
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beneficial in other ways as well: able to work with peers, getting hands-on experience, learning co-operation and other
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as well as social skills. Another
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perhaps related
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disadvantage
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the disadvantage
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would be,
unable
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to get in-person knowledge from teachers and lecturers. Undoubtedly, teachers are able to share
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examples and are able to demonstrate things in a better way when their
students
are physically present. In conclusion,
although
it is understandable
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why
students
are increasingly opting for online
education
, in my opinion, it is better to experience college life.
Nevertheless
, if the
students'
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circumstances do not allow
to
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study offline, they should go for
distant
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education
.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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