Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extent do you agree !

It is argued that information about culture and

history

is being presented vastly on the internet, underestimating the function of

museums

and some think that

museums

are irrelevant. In my view, I totally disagree with

this

opinion.

To begin

with,

museums

are places for historical

artifacts

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and masterpieces. Being able to observe actual things is far

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greater than looking at the Internet.

In addition

, audiences are able to touch and feel great pieces at the same time

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the feeling helps to understand the worth and

history

behind them, giving another kind of experience. A good example of

that is

some schools provide free shuttle buses for students to visit the war museum during the historical journey to cultivate their patriotism and solidarity by watching the past pictures of wars and historical pieces.

Therefore

, students might have an insight into the country’s

history

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and appreciate the freedom that they are enjoying today.

Additionally

,

museums

bring in financial benefits by attracting

oversea

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tourists

over

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the world. From that, they contribute to the development of the tourism sector of the country and help the government to maintain historical buildings and statues by collecting fees from customers.

Furthermore

, the surrounding places like restaurants, cafes and souvenir shops benefit from

museums

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the traffic.

This

is particularly the case for

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visitors, who are able to find good

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food

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nearby

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the

museums

easily, boosting the local economy

due to

the traffic it generates. In short, I advocate that

although

we can easily find

culture

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cultural

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and

history

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historical

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information on the internet, the function of

museums

is unreplaceable

due to

its great benefits in terms of economy and education.