The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, major

internet

firms have easily collected

private

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data

of their

users

.

Although

it may be an effective tool for serving customers better,

this

trend raises many valid concerns. In my opinion, the storage of personal

information

by large web-based companies and organizations will do more harm than good. On the one hand,

internet

companies themselves would argue that their intentions are primarily to provide more suitable services.

Initially

,

users

may feel convenient when they quickly see ads related to their

favorites

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.

However

, being bombarded with loads of advertisements all

days

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day

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and

nights

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, web-based

users

get

annoy

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since their every activity on the

internet

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to be

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tracked intensively. A survey in America has shown that once a participant was clicking on a page of a flower store, he would see more than ten other flower shops in his Facebook feeds. It is hard to count the number of advertisements a person facing with every day.

In addition

, the privacy and safety of

users

are put in danger when personal

data

is seized by

third

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party. After analyzing individual

information

and

behaviors

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, companies or organizations can manipulate

users

by giving confusing

information

. Take the latest US presidential election

for example

. It is believed that foreign organizations sought out vulnerable groups and fed them false

instruction

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instructions

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to influence

voting

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the voting

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result

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. Worse, when a great deal of private

information

is held by enterprises whose confidential level is not

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, it

likely

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to become

target

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the target

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of technological criminals,

such

as hackers. Stolen

data

can be used to login into bank accounts or defraud by creating fake

identifies

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identities

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. In conclusion, the benefits of access to personal

information

by

internet

enterprises do not overweigh

drawbacks

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the drawbacks

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. It is suggested that governments enforce strict regulations that restrict the storage of private

data

.