In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is this? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem?

In the prevalent era,in many countries,many
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cities
have become too big and overcrowded.
People
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often
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often
prefer to live here as it is providing
best
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facility .
However
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it can cause numerous problems to all individuals as they face excessive noise and
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environment.
Moreover
,
this
problem can be solved by taking strict initiatives. In
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I will discuss the main reason
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occurrence
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and basic steps to
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this
situation. The most important reason
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aforementioned
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statement is that
,
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nowadays many a parsonage shift from countryside
area
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to developed
cities
as they will get numerous employment opportunities and get each and every facility near
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their residential area. Probing
further
they settled in major
cities
which reason these
cities
becomes more big and overcrowded.
Moreover
, due to overpopulation, the higher authorities and ministry
also
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the city
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,so that
people
live a luxurious life here.for
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,
in
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delhi
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Delhi
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,
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of India ,is
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big and overcrowded place as it
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the
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all basic necessity of
people
who live here. Despite
this
,it adversely affected the peace and sound environment of
cities
. It is
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,moral duty and responsibility of higher authorities and ministry to spend some portion of
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the budget
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on increasing the infrastructural
facility's
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facilities
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of small
cities
so that some
people
shift there and
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the problem
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problem
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problems
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of
overcongestion
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over congestion
and overcrowded are solved.
Moreover
,
government
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the government
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also
take initiative to expand the aforementioned
cities
so that
people
live here without overcrowded. To
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exemplify
examplify
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exemplify
this
,in Chandigarh,
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of Punjab and
harayana
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Haryana
Narayana
, higher authorities spent their maximum part of
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and
people
from
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,Bombay ,Hyderabad and other
cities
are shifted here as they provide
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most advanced facilities. To recapitulates
this
,it is right to say that the situation of overcrowding,
overcongestion
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over congestion
and bigger
cities
are properly solved if
ministry
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the ministry
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and countrymen take necessary measures.
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